Monday, July 2

ALTRUISM - 55 FICTION

                 
                                       

                                         " The food is bland " 

                                  - He remarked unabashedly . A pang of familiar emotion swept through her . Not the blatant unacknowledgement of her effort , but the remorse for having let him down hurt her more. Determined to prepare a better dish for dinner , she started cleaning his left over . 

                            
   
        Infact , isnt pleasing the husband her ultimate duty ?  

                                                          
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4 comments:

  1. 55 loverJuly 2, 2012 at 12:03 PM

    awesome :)
    F 55 is getting out the best from you..
    nice message conveyed in a strong yet simple way

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  2. MalinyJuly 2, 2012 at 12:12 PM

    thanks deepak :) you inspire a lot i should say :)

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  3. TTTJuly 2, 2012 at 3:09 PM

    fabulous ! u've conveyed so much in 55 words ...

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  4. Sankara Jayanth SJuly 3, 2012 at 8:13 PM

    a peculiar work, i would say, considering the title you gave it. "altruism". That's wonderful. :)

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