Thursday, July 25

That Final Arc - Fiction


The overpowering scent of freshly brewed coffee hung invitingly in the air. It had been remaining so for the past few minutes, quite daringly challenging my alacrity - the alacrity of a professional who was unflinchingly feeding raw materials in constant streams to the contraption at hand, so that it would churn out the desired products in another blink of her eye. “ The elixir will just have to wait for another half hour more”, I muttered under my breath as the tantalized bundle of nerves in charge of my senses kept firing away diligently, seeking respite. 

It was close to 6 when I left my cabin, hurriedly sloshing down my throat a cup of tepid coffee. Half of my colleagues had already dashed for the cab which would take the employees to their respective homes.

“ Hey Maya, late as usual ? No shortcuts to success eh! ”

The clutter of the rattling keys that accompanied the raspy voice was allusive. I turned back and flashed my boss my widest grin before embarking on the elevator that led me to the lowest floor.

The sky was alarmingly pale that evening. No crimson tinge. No home bound birds. The scenario that but unraveled before me was entirely one that defied the signs of nature – public vehicles that swished past me emitted venom from every single crevice of their being and the pudgy man who knocked me down to the pavement was more a critter of a less civilized world than that owned by Mother Earth, thanks to the cords that drained him of his senses through his ears, both figuratively and literally.

The loud blast of an unidentified vehicle ( The latest SUV perhaps ? ) nudged me back to the problem at hand – That I was ten minutes late. And that unfortunately meant I had to wait for twenty minutes more for the next bus which took me home. And they say troubles, when they attacked you, they did so in torrents. The street vendors, all at once, started shifting their temporary workplace to more secure corners as bulky drops of rain started pouring down on the already weighed down world rolling before me, igniting both a fury and inevitability in the home bound people to move faster.

My eyes had already started vying with the cue of sleep, the frozen joints of my body badly in need of soothing. Sans an umbrella, the wisest way to evade the unwelcoming shower was to seek solace under the nearest roof and I did just that, undoubtedly and unerringly.

“ Ma’m would you like to take a look at the newest additions that we have?”

People had a way with pouncing on me from behind when least expected and as always I jerked my head in startle to the gleaming, albeit coarse face of a middle aged man standing right next to me.

“ Oh ! Sorry. I was trying to keep myself from drenching in the rain. Maybe some other time, if you will let me share an inch of your shop now till the rain subsides? Out of compassion of course?”

The chime of the golden bells left suspended from the entry door rang through the dingy, yet well cared to shop. A customer let himself in, brushing aside silver droplets of rain from his hair, though with an air of inquisitiveness, quite unlike the way I had barged in. Not caring to reply to my query, the shop keeper left my side, leaving me high and dry amidst a flock of customers who found their way through the shop with ease born out of practice. And that was what prompted me to look around and look around did I for the next few minutes.

Minutes zoomed past in a jiffy until that moment when the shop keeper startled me once again from behind.

“ So, are you from Kerala?”

“ No. Why ?!”

“ From the way you were sniffing the pages of ‘ The God Of Small Things’ a while back near the Booker Prize section, I deduced, however falsely, that you were intrigued by the theme of the book. “

“ I cant deny the fact that you were partly right. Indeed am i intrigued by the theme of the book, but that wasn’t the sole reason why I was found bonding with it”

“ So, have you read the book?”

“ A couple of times, yes. “

“ I see. Do you need anything from my book shop now?”

“ No, I don’t. I am not allowed the privilege of savoring the alluring pages of a newly bought book anymore. Working woman. Mother of a two year old. I guess that explains a lot!”

“Please enlighten me, will you ? I didn’t quite get the relation between the two.”

I watched the man as his sharp jet black eyes narrowed down to two slits, peering at me as if he was indirectly solving a riddle for me, a riddle which needed to be solved with utmost precision and direness. A desperate customer kept calling out to him from around the far dimly lit corner of the shop, perhaps seeking help to dig out his favourite book from the pile of Classics stacked against the edge. Ignoring the calls, he kept staring at me as if his next move depended wholly on my answer. 

I tried to laugh his query off, with a smug on my face, replying in a haste , “ You see, it is complicated. Reading was so much of a passion way back when I was in school and i used to be the happiest while cuddling up in my bed reading a new book. But now, the habit has died down or maybe I lost the drive someway down my neglected shoddy lane while I was scurrying past the polished highway in this mad race. I can squeeze in time if I need to at this point of time, but whether there be time or not, in the end, it is the inclination of mind that matters and unfortunately that is where i failed or rather that is where my life hassles failed me.”

“You cannot be truer ma’m. And maybe that is why only a focused few manage to live their lives the happiest while others live in desperation or at the least nurturing a slight yearning forever when all it takes is the right inclination of their minds to draw that final arc to perfect their life circle.”

As if it dawned on him just then that he had a customer waiting, he left my side, draped back in the cloak of a considerate shopkeeper, to lend his hand to the person at the far corner who was in search of that particular book he was dying to get hold on.

The street lay washed of all its sins at the mere touch of that steady rain. The parched sun had almost vanished behind night’s pall seeking a good night’s sleep, albeit not forgetting to hang his envoy, the round silver snippet of beauty, in charge of his kingdom while he peacefully slept. The city had r eclined back at the cue of nature and I stole a look at the book shop before boarding my destined bus. The shop keeper stood watching me from inside, his gaze implicit and his smile knowing. I tightened my grip on my newly purchased book, drawing it closer to me, before nodding a goodbye to the person who, out of sheer serendipity or perhaps even advertently, descended before me and slowed me down.
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P.S : Completely unrelated i know, still can't help but shout out that this is the 150th post :)

P.P.S: This story was published on Tamarind Rice, an online magazine, in its July issue. To know more about the magazine, visit their page Here. 




26 comments:

  1. I enjoyed the description of places and weather more than anything else, Malini:)

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  2. Ha, this is what I need Maliny :) To slow down my pace in life and enjoy it rather than racing around from one place to another... :) So, does this post mean that you have decided to slow down and take some time out and write more :) Just, kidding, missing your posts :)

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    1. After much relaxation for around 4 months i am back to square one Prasanna, though that is something i have been looking forward to for a long time now. More studies coming up :)I hope i get to keep in touch with my favourite blogs, if not writing new posts . Thank you so much for the words. Felt great :)

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  3. Heya Maliny. After a long time. But you are back with a bang :) Loved the post and description about the rains and most importantly, the places. Loved reading it :) keep on :)

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    1. Hey Saurabh, Nice to see you after long. Thank you for the words ! Hope you are doing good :)

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  4. wow! loved the detailing in a lovely story. At times complete strangers knock you and remind something that is missing and not to be missed.

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    1. That is so true Kalpana. That is the one thing that i intended to convey through the story :)

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  5. Nicely narrated Maliny..
    I liked that at the end the fierce love for reading was back..

    So many time unknowingly few people help us in taking some big decisions of our lives.

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    1. Thank you so much Jyoti, for the encouragement and for the input :)

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  6. Wow... loved it!

    So detailed and well narrated.

    P.S: Congrats for 150th post. Cheers for many more to come!

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    1. Hey me, thank you so very much dear :)

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  7. I am floored by your expressions and command over the language. As I said earlier, your writings satiate me to no end. I reiterate the same at the cost of sounding repetitive.

    Geetashree

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    1. And you make me soar high every time you say that Geeta ji. I am deeply honoured to have you here everytime :)

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  8. What a swet and lovely story ,Malini.The last para is excellent.!

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  9. That's wonderful write. You describe things in your own inimitable style.

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  10. That's a very nice write-up Maliny, many times we meet ourselves in strange places and come to terms with our lost selves... Your story nicely brought out that aspect :)

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    1. Truly glad that your comment echoed the essence of the story Reshma. Thank you so much for dropping by :)

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  11. Hey doc. It's nice to come here, after a little gap I guess; busy life! Life doesn't allow us all the luxuries we would like to have. That's how it goes.

    I loved it, thoroughly, not only as a reader, but also as a writer. You have written it so beautifully, that my attention frequently drifted from the story towards your unique writing style. Keep it up dear. See ya again :)

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    1. I am glad to have you back here after such a long gap, Deepak. Hope you are doing good :)

      Above all, thank you so much for the good words. This sure is a delightful impetus to keep writing more:) Hoping to see you more over here.

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  12. A total stranger can sometimes make you meet yourself. Well written ! :)

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    1. Well said ! Thankyou for the comment :)

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  13. Congrats on your 150th post :-)

    More than the story I liked the writing style, the attention to detail and your vivid description. 'The dimly lit corner', the 'classics stacked up', 'Person at the far corner searching for the book 'Wonderful :-) Keep writing more.

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    1. A reader as dedicated as you is a treasure, Ashwini:)

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