The spring never ends,
In the land of smiles
Show me one path to gloom ?
I will show you hundreds to bloom !
Whisper so did you close to my ears,
Caress soft did you wiping my tears . .
Give me wings; colour me zest . .
You leave me smiling at my beautiful best !
I know not destiny's route . .
Nor how feelings churn out
To bask in flames till the end ?
To burn out to ashes in fate's hand ?
But close my eyes; dream you near . .
The fears drown; the doubts fade
Need i fear ? need i doubt ?
There is more to life than the ending, i know . .
There is laughter, there are tears
Moments to be etched in memories down the years . .
To savour them the most you taught ;
To relish them my best i learnt . .
So here i am, loving you to bits this second ;
For those bits complete my moments , i trust . .
nice one :-)
ReplyDeleteCheers!
SUB
Wonderfully composed!!
ReplyDeleteLoved the opening four lines.
thanx SUB :)
ReplyDelete@ vyankatesh : thanx . .those r my fav lines too :)
I loved the last six lines the most. The poem is very good. :)
ReplyDeleteThanx Nethra :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful thoughts on living in the moment and love:-). Impressive!
ReplyDeleteShow me one path to gloom ?
ReplyDeleteI will show you hundreds to bloom !
That's the spirit!!! :)
Nice Poem Maliniji...
Loved the way you concluded it :)
There is laughter, there are tears
Moments to be etched in memories down the years .
thank u GV :)
ReplyDeleteHi Malini.This is my first visit to your site. The poem is fabulous.The lines
ReplyDeleteNeed I fear ? need I doubt ?
There is more to life than the ending, I know . .
have so much depth, which cannot be explained in words.