Wednesday, March 9

In The Moments . .

                                                                                      

   The spring never ends,
   In the land of smiles


   Show me one path to gloom ?
   I will show you hundreds to bloom !


   Whisper so did you close to my ears,
   Caress soft did you wiping my tears . .


   Give me wings; colour me zest . .
   You leave me smiling at my beautiful best !


   I know not destiny's route . .
   Nor how feelings churn out


   To bask in flames till the end ?
   To burn out to ashes in fate's hand ?


   But close my eyes; dream you near . .
   The fears drown; the doubts fade


   Need i fear ? need i doubt ?
   There is more to life than the ending, i know . .






    There is laughter, there are tears
    Moments to be etched in memories down the years . .


    To savour them the most you taught ;
    To relish them my best i learnt . .


    So here i am, loving you to bits this second ;
    For those bits complete my moments , i trust . .





9 comments:

  1. Wonderfully composed!!

    Loved the opening four lines.

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  2. thanx SUB :)

    @ vyankatesh : thanx . .those r my fav lines too :)

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  3. I loved the last six lines the most. The poem is very good. :)

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  4. Wonderful thoughts on living in the moment and love:-). Impressive!

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  5. Show me one path to gloom ?
    I will show you hundreds to bloom !

    That's the spirit!!! :)
    Nice Poem Maliniji...
    Loved the way you concluded it :)


    There is laughter, there are tears
    Moments to be etched in memories down the years .

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  6. Hi Malini.This is my first visit to your site. The poem is fabulous.The lines
    Need I fear ? need I doubt ?
    There is more to life than the ending, I know . .
    have so much depth, which cannot be explained in words.

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