Sunday, December 2

The Revival

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 34; the thirty-fourth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "Of-Course, I'm insane"

                         The clamour of the chai vendor shook Diya up from her dream . The hustle bustle around her revived her back to her senses . Yes , she was on a train that would take her to Palghat . She looked out at the vast stretch of paddy fields flanking the rail . The crimson shade of the sky would have invoked an impulse in her to dabble on a piece of white paper  if not for the hefty cloud swaying in her heart . 

                     Resting her head against the window sill , Diya checked her phone . It was  6 P.M . Three more hours to their destination . Her gaze fell on the old couple sitting opposite her . They seemed happy . More than that they seemed content . Now thats the curious thing about being heartbroken . When you flutter in the strokes of love the people around you cease to exist . Your eyes wander in awe at the splendour of nature . You see the world in a shade of red . And when the same clutch of love strangles you a tad bit harder , thats when you realise the world isnt a garden of red roses after all . There are people in it . All shades of people ; some black , some yellow , some red . Happy , sad , content , overzealous , dejected ; The emotions are multitude .

  " Diya , do you need something to eat ? " , her mother enquired . 

                       A bundle of  infinite affection resonated in her voice .  Diya shook her head . She was not hungry , not even parched . Her parents headed back to their discussions on the families they would be visiting the week ahead . No , this wasnt a mere trip to reconnect with old friends . This was a means to rekindle her lost laughter .   


                       Three months back , she had been on the same train travelling towards the same destination . For a different purpose though - To visit Vivek . 

                        Vivek , the guy who sprinkled her days with the one mesmerising spice of life ; Happiness . The person who instilled the indelible spark of passion in her . Not just for love , but for the whole world , towards art , towards words , towards every nuance of life which remained unexplored . Vivek, the guy , who after drenching her neck deep in fervour forgot to carry her in his arms such that she wouldnt drown head deep .

                     He never had a hint that she would be coming . She was always the impulsive type , a trait she regretted at the end of that day . Try as she might she couldnt get through to talk to him for the past month . Now she was going to pay an undeclared visit to him . Reaching the station she called him on his number . He didnt attend it as usual . She thought of sending him a text , though its been days since he replied to her texts . 

" Vivek , i know you would be angry when you know this . But i am here at the Palghat railway station now . Could you pick up my call for once " Her message read . 

                      She was surprised to see her phone ringing the next minute . She attended the call , a  sparkle twinkling on her eyes for the first time in days . 

   " What is wrong with you Diya ! Have you gone insane ! "

   " Ofcourse i am insane Vivek ! . I have always been . I am not asking much of your time . An hour , or at the most a few minutes . I am not sure why i came down here without letting you know before . I knew i would reach the station past nine at night . But you loved that side of me , the spontaneous me . Dont you . I came here for you Vivek . Please give me  a few moments . I wouldnt bug you more "

  " No , i cant meet you . Priya wouldnt like it ". He retorted.

  " Priya , the girl you had been talking about ? " . How relationships take newer forms in a matter of days . 

" Yes ". 
                          She was almost on the verge of breaking down . She noticed a girl staring at her from across the waiting room  . Not always one finds such melodrama in public places ! Diya mumbled further , " Think of all the good times we had and just meet me as your old friend lost in the city in this late hour . Please Vivek "

    " I have told you once , Diya . You didnt tell me you were coming , for one . Another is , as you said , you are an old friend , but a forgotten old friend . " . Saying that he cut the phone . 

                     Aghast , Diya  deftly dialled his number again only to hear the busy tone . She sat there staring at her phone for a long time . She remembered dialling his number for one hour at a stretch .  Tears started pouring down her face . To that moment she was not sure why she took that train that day . Was she that insane  . Somehow she had to suffice the one desire that had been ruining her days over the past one month . To see him , to talk things over , which she failed to do . After trying in vain to reach him for more than an hour , she noticed that her fingers had begun to ache . Resting the phone on her lap , She closed her eyes and sank herself more onto the chair .  

                 Maybe she dozed off for a while for it was the lady in charge of the waiting room who reminded her that it was almost 11 p.m . 

" Where is your train ticket , madam .? " The stout lady enquired .

" I dont have a ticket " Diya replied helplessly.  

" I am sorry madam , you are not allowed to be here in the waiting room overnight if you dont possess a train ticket . "

"Oh , i am sorry . I didnt know that . When is the next train back to Cochin ?" . 

              She had planned to stay there overnight and take the early morning train back . Didnt Vivek use to drop her back usually ? She reminisced with pain . 

" The Ahalya Express has just come ." The lady strained her neck to confirm the train was still on the platform . Its about to leave now ." She almost yelled .

                    Diya remembered grabbing her backpack and heading in search of the ladies compartment like a girl frantically trying to escape yet another disaster in her life. Managing to cling onto the door in time she realised she had no ticket . She hoped the ticket examiner wouldnt try barging into the heavily packed compartment . The crowd was frightening . She slept on the floor with a bunch of other women . Though it seemed unfortunate atfirst , later she realised she was lucky to have secured atleast that much space . 

                     Opening her eyes the next day she tried hard to let herself believe that the whole incident was a nightmare. But the pang which returned back to her heart  with all sharpness proved otherwise .

                  Now after three months her parents found out the perfect place to bring back the joys in her life . Their native place . They never knew what had happened . Just that she was heartbroken . If they had known ,they wouldnt have planned their journey to the same station which had shattered her life . 

                      Diya didnt complain . She was going to face the past . She was prepared to let it go .  Her eyes grazed the sky now donning a lavender shade . Tucking back the strands of hair that fell on her face she smiled as the soft breeze brushed past her .

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  1. A beautiful story ... this was really heart felt !!!

  2. Thanks Green Speck . . Appreciate your dropping by everytime :)

  3. well narrated...could almost sense this being turned into a series!! so is the next part in the making?

    all the best for BAT!

  4. A well developed one... Nice narration and ATB for the BAT...

  5. you bring the picture to life. a poignant touching picture that moves in front of my eyes as I read out loud. one of the best I hv read recently. Really beautiful narration. thank you.

  6. @ Harikrishna thank you . . All the best to you too

  7. @ Leo Hey thanks a ton ! coming from you its a great honour indeed . . thank you :)

  8. @ little princess well havent thought of a series as of now . Now that you have asked it maybe i will give it a shot . . hopefully . .thank you :)

  9. It was definitely a revival of tales, woven so nicely. I admire the way you explain thoughts & this story was no different. Definitely a winning post dear :) Take care! All the best :)

  10. Maliny...Its like a survivor's manual .. and all of us face ups and downs in life.. Dealing IS a difficult task. But there is a very valid reason for why one ought to deal with life...sad story but full of promise. Hope she gets a fresh lease of life soon ...! Lovely...
    beautifully descriptive.

  11. @ tanya thanks a lot for the kind words tanya . . :)

  12. panchali ma'm absolutely true your words are . . so happy to have you abroad ! thanks a lot for visiting and leaving behind those wonderful words :)

  13. thanks chetan . .do come by more :)

  14. Very nicely woven tale of heart break with hope of revival. You write amazingly well. I liked it ended on a positive note!

  15. Thankyou for those words meenakshi . .made my day ! :) I did want to end it on a positive note . . I do believe a lot in the healing power of time .

  16. A good read and very well written.

    Wish you all the best for BAT!

  17. thanks puja :) loved your entry too . . all the best :)

  18. Moving on, is definitely a very difficult phase of life. One of the few hell-on-earth situations. Very well written post :) Enjoyed the read. All the best for BAT! :)

  19. Brilliant narration. There may be ups and downs in life but one shouldnt give up so easily. Nice work :-)

  20. thankyou rajkiran ! happy to have you abroad . . :)

  21. definitely Ash :) thanks for those nice words . . :)

  22. Nice story and very well narrated. :)
    ATB for BAT!

  23. Once appreciated spontaneity is now perceived as insanity. That's my take away, and it is well put.

  24. I read a couple of comments above and yeah this shud be a series for sure .. I am sure at least another part :)

    all the best for the contest


  25. hey thanks bikram ! let me see if i can come up with one :) the contest results are out . . i did get some cheers though i missed the gold and silver batom . . thanks for the appreciation . .


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