Tuesday, December 11

At The Coffee Hut


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It seemed a dull uninspiring day 
Sun shining bright , the month being May !
I walked to the Coffee Hut , not quite gay
To see you at the table , digging on your whey .

I sank down on some corner without any say
Cued for the waiter , who soon came my way
You had no clue ,but with my heart you did play
Leaving  me lost , every other time you sway.

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-soon to be part of an anthology-

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19 comments:

  1. No words to say,
    It's in a different way,
    I liked your, words play.

    Nice read,.. :) take care...

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  2. I liked your rhyming words ... wonderfully coordinated :-)

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  3. You had no clue ,but with my heart you did play

    With a lovely smile , you soon mouthed a ' Hey '.

    To hide my blush , oh , my locks gave away


    beautiful poem maliny..

    just loved above three lines... :)

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  4. thankyou green speck :) the rhyming was intented . just wrote it when i felt like scribbling something simple . . :)

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  5. thankyou deepak ji :) not always the lines come out perfectly . . happy that you liked it :)

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  6. Well written. Loved it. :)

    www.rajniranjandas.blogspot.in

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  7. thanks niranjan :) drop by more . .

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  8. Loved the way you used your words to describe this romantic saga. :)

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  9. Glad that you liked bikram :) drop by more . .

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  10. hhhmmmm....love is in the air....:)

    BTW well penned thoughts there by you...:))

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  11. Sooooooo sweeeeeeet :) :) I'm smiling and kept smiling all thru d poem! Love the rhyming going on here!

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  12. thanks chhavi ! happy to have you over . . love your poems too ! thanks for following :)

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  13. Wow! Your poem can make any girl blush! *Blush* "Blush* way to go Maliny!

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