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It seemed a dull uninspiring day
Sun shining bright , the month being May !
I walked to the Coffee Hut , not quite gay
To see you at the table , digging on your whey .
I sank down on some corner without any say
Cued for the waiter , who soon came my way
You had no clue ,but with my heart you did play
Leaving me lost , every other time you sway.
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No words to say,
ReplyDeleteIt's in a different way,
I liked your, words play.
Nice read,.. :) take care...
I liked your rhyming words ... wonderfully coordinated :-)
ReplyDeleteYou had no clue ,but with my heart you did play
ReplyDeleteWith a lovely smile , you soon mouthed a ' Hey '.
To hide my blush , oh , my locks gave away
beautiful poem maliny..
just loved above three lines... :)
Thanks sasikumar . . :)
ReplyDeletethankyou green speck :) the rhyming was intented . just wrote it when i felt like scribbling something simple . . :)
ReplyDeletethankyou deepak ji :) not always the lines come out perfectly . . happy that you liked it :)
ReplyDeletebeautifully romantic!
ReplyDeletehey thanks Me :)
ReplyDeleteWell written. Loved it. :)
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thanks niranjan :) drop by more . .
ReplyDeleteLoved the way you used your words to describe this romantic saga. :)
ReplyDeleteawww that is romantic :)
ReplyDeleteBikram's
thanks a lot GR :)
ReplyDeleteGlad that you liked bikram :) drop by more . .
ReplyDeletehhhmmmm....love is in the air....:)
ReplyDeleteBTW well penned thoughts there by you...:))
Sooooooo sweeeeeeet :) :) I'm smiling and kept smiling all thru d poem! Love the rhyming going on here!
ReplyDeletethanks chhavi ! happy to have you over . . love your poems too ! thanks for following :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Maliny :)
ReplyDeleteWow! Your poem can make any girl blush! *Blush* "Blush* way to go Maliny!
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