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Sad news , bitter days
dash of sugar - sweet , stirring
mother's soulful kiss .
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Written for Haiku Heights . This week's prompt being ' Sugar ' . To be a part of the Challenge start following Haiku Heights .
Beautiful always a mother's love !!!
ReplyDeleteSo true amrit ! :)
DeleteA kiss can sweeten almost any bitterness.
ReplyDeleteRightly said ! welcome to this space . Hope i see you more over here :)
DeleteA mother's kiss is one of life's most wonderful experiences.
ReplyDeleteso true Hazel . Thanks for reading the post :)
DeleteTells so much about mother and mother's love...whether it's about your good or bad days one's mother will always sower with a bliss...!!!
ReplyDeleteThats indeed the essence of the haiku :) Thankyou so much for the wonderful comment anjan !
DeleteO this is beautiful Maliny, so sweet :)
ReplyDeletethankyou cheryl :) First time here isnt ? keep coming back ! :)
DeleteA mother's hug and sugary sweet kiss can drive away all your sadness..love the emotional tug of your haiku :)
ReplyDeletebeautifully summarised mixi . Glad that you captured the poem in its wholeness . Your comments are always an inspiration :)
DeleteWhat a beautiful, uplifting haiku. Love the sweetness in this piece.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the appreciation . It always feels great to have a new reader ! :)
DeleteThis is really beautiful!:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Tarang ! :)
DeleteSweet indeed!
ReplyDeleteGlad that you liked it sir . Thank you:)
DeleteLovely words... :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Pranita :)
Deletebeautiful
ReplyDeleteThankyou :)
Deleteawww...immaculate piece!
ReplyDeleteThankyou Panchali ma'm . A comment from you is always special !
DeleteThank you so much Bushra :)
ReplyDeleteSweetly written
ReplyDeleteA Mother can magically right so much in life...Beautiful lines Maliny:)
ReplyDeleteSo wonderfully said Reshma . Thankyou for the appreciation . Liked your blog as well . Will be back to read more from you :)
DeleteA mother's kiss -- balm for most childhood sadness!
ReplyDeleteTrue to the core . It feels great see the footprints of a fresh reader over here ! Thank you for the visit :)
DeleteSplendid take on the cue,nothing to beat a mother's love.
ReplyDeleteTrue Indu . Thankyou for dropping by and for those words :)
DeleteBeautiful love story in a poem.
ReplyDeleteThankyou alice :)
DeleteVery lovely...I am and will crave for my amma's kiss! :)
ReplyDeleteeverybody does akash :)
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