Monday, February 11

Hear Me ?


Agile, the masked ones squander, 
Words of cuss, at me they mercilessly shower.
Life is no maze, but a mere rigid line
The rules,like chains - they smother, they entwine.

Blindfolded, I tread well beaten trails  
Passion - nipped , now mere muffled wails.
Born a human, engraved with emotions,
Aren't dreams my forgotten birth rights?

Friends crumpled to shreds in gore; 
Flames of love stamped sin and sore.
Seeking peace, I whimpered in the dark,
Never got any, for the truth was shoddy and stark. 

To fight with pen I learnt in time,
Pellets of words so perfect with rhyme.
Bore through their chest, thorough and right;
I dabbled in words, ain't bloodless this fight?

Wait! did I commit a crime? 
For cuff links cling together like chime!
Binding my hands, yet freeing my soul;
My words shall scream, through mountain mounds.

Shun the hatred, shun the evil;
Break the chains, the reins of the devil! 
Open your eyes, won't you sycophant? 
This is no rebel, but a human's pleading rant.  
              
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24 comments:

  1. Maliny - You've been nominated for the Liebster Award. Please check my post for details - http://fisheyes-meanie.blogspot.in/2013/02/my-first-liebster-award.html

    Congratulations!

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    1. thank you meenakshi :) Always an honour to receive the Liebster award . Also congratulations on your award ! you deserve it so very much given the prolific writer you are ! keep writing :)

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  2. very well written, words wage a bloodless fight! Keep this fight on.

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    1. hey thankyou meenakshi :) Sure words can wage one of the strongest fights !

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  3. Very beautiful poem Maliny. Keep pouring in words that have Charisma!

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    1. thankyou for the appreciation Fayaz :)

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  4. Beautifully written Maliny! You rhymed the poem wonderfully!

    ' Born a human , engraved with emotions ,
    Arent dreams my forgotten birth rights ?'

    Lovely lines...

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    1. Good to see you highlighting those lines valli :) Thank you for the constant support . Keep coming back :)

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  5. coming to the blog spaces after long time and its nice to read a poem with passion of love changin to fight for freedom from the darkness within. Nice one

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    1. welcome back ramesh . liked the way you summarised the poem . Thankyou for the visit and for leaving behind your opinion :)

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  6. This is incredibly beautiful.. unbelievably well written.

    difficult to pick a line.. every line is sculptured..

    i guess i can't say anything else.. hats off to an expert writer.

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    1. an incredibly beautiful comment it was as well deepak ! :) thankyou for those overwhelming words . Keep reading , keep writing :)

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    1. thankyou sunil . welcome to this space :)

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  8. WOW! Beautifully structured lines making one very elegantly written poem.

    Trying to go through your other posts.
    Following you.
    Please do have a quick peek on my blog if you get chance.

    http://mycactusdress.blogspot.com/
    Dhara

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    1. Thankyou Dhara for those good words. Beautiful name you have .:)

      welcome to my blog as well ! Thank you for following :) I will be coming over to your blog in a short while . .

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