Wednesday, February 13

Broken - 55 Fiction



Sreya reluctantly knocked at the door . The backpack hurt her shoulder . 

Her mother stepped outside . Overjoyous , she scooped little Sreya up .

Sreya glanced back .

He waved from inside the car . 


" Why dont you ever come inside dad “ , Sreya wondered as her eyes welled up . 


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4 comments:

  1. Interesting read. Says so much in just 55 words.. likes it..

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  2. Ah! That's so sad!
    Beautiful story with 55 words...

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    1. Hey thanks valli :) Yes its sad when one listens to the kid's side of the story .

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