Sreya reluctantly knocked at the door . The backpack hurt
her shoulder .
Her mother stepped outside . Overjoyous , she scooped little Sreya up .
Sreya glanced back .
He waved from inside the car .
" Why dont you ever come inside dad “ , Sreya wondered as her eyes welled
up .
Interesting read. Says so much in just 55 words.. likes it..
ReplyDeleteAh! That's so sad!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story with 55 words...
Hey thanks valli :) Yes its sad when one listens to the kid's side of the story .
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