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Raghu cringed in uneasiness as the camera zoomed in on his face
. Noticing the queer expression dawning on his face , the man behind the lens
alighted from his seat and strolled towards Raghu . He slid his arm around
Raghu's shoulder , a warm smile twinkled in his eyes as he said in his mellow
tone - " Relax Raghu . There is nothing to be scared of . Just smile
softly looking at the transparent screen infront of the camera . Thats all
what is needed . " Assuring Raghu with a comforting hug , he retreated back
to disappear behind the lens .
Raghu , hailing from a downtrodden village , was one among the
many distraught people who fled his land , allured by the many promising job
opportunities in the neighbouring state . Travelling with no ticket was a crime
, he had known , yet , his mind was frantic with the anticipation to escape
from the strangles of poverty by securing himself with a job , however petty that
proved to be . Left high and dry near the railway station premises , as days
dragged by , he had started showering words of cuss at himself for being such
an impulsive jerk . Somehow , the sun started shining in his favour
gradually . A kind person who happened to walk by while he was weeping silently
in a dingy corner of a shop had been magnanimous enough to take him along to
appoint him as the security guard of his jewellery shop . Years rolled by
gifting him a caring wife and a lovely kid .
" We are done with you Raghu . Now its your turn little Vichu
"
Raghu watched as his three year old son approached the seat , his
face contorting in shyness . The crew belonged to a prominent television
channel who had come to cover his family as part of their ' Life in the slum '
live documetary . As a dozen sympathetic eyes focussed on his son , Raghu heard
the lady who anchored the show reading out a short account on his son from a
file of papers - his son's patient manual .
" This innocent kid , who yearns with every inch of his mind
to go out there and play with his friends is chained to the four walls of his
house by the cruel tentacles of a gnawing disease . " The lady went on
with her compassionate speech , an air of exhuberance dominating her demeanour
.
Raghu recollected the doctors words as he watched his little son
settling on the seat reluctantly .
' Your son is suffering from a very grave heart disease , Raghu .
If not operated in a month's time , the situation would turn even more bleak . If you could atleast conjure a small sizeable amount , we would admit
him . Otherwise you will have take him to the Government Hospital
in the nearby town ,where the facilities are bare minimum , i have heard
"
Raghu was jolted up from his thoughts as the crew members started wrapping up their show . Raghu checked his watch and realised that it was almost
time for him to return to the shop for his night duty .
Reaching hastily at the shop , he noticed that the shop owner was
still engaging a client . As he was locking his bicycle chain , the shop owner
along with his client walked out of the shop , laughing over some trivial joke
.
" Aah Raghu , here take this key . I need to be away from
town for the night . Incase i am late , make sure that the first worker to
arrive at the shop tomorrow morning is let in . Keep the key safe . I trust you . You are my most dedicated employee " . The owner said patting his shoulder .
Raghu slipped into his usual shoddy cubicle outside the shop once
the owner left the place . He sweared in pain as the mosquitos started bititng
his legs as if in a bout of revenge . And that was when what the owner's grave reminder
struck him deep . “ Raghu , keep the key
safe ! “
Fumbling inside his pocket , he slid the key out . ‘ What if it
was God’s way of opening a window to help him out of his misery . Will the
saab know if I steal something as unnoticeable as a gold ring .I could get a
good amount of money as loan from the lender couldn’t I ? ‘
Raghu , after dissecting the thought over and over in his mind ,
decided to put it to action . After having admitted himself inside , he scurried
past the counter to the wooden rack accommodating the gold rings . He hurriedly
snatched a petite ring from the rung and scampered back to the door .
‘ Are You doing the right
thing , Raghu ? ‘
Raghu stopped in his tracks as a voice rumbled from somewhere near
him . He realized regretfully that it was his own
tainted conscience which just spoke to him . ‘ But I need the money . I cant
lose my son . Its no fault of his ! ‘ . He retorted in agony .
The grief striken face of his wife dawned on his mind . She
would blame him with harrowing words for letting their son die if he failed to
procure the required amount of money . As the gasping state of his son flashed
across his eyes , Raghu strengthened his clutch on the ring . His heart was
pleading him to go on with the act while his head threatened him with a ‘ No’ .
When Raghu returned to his seat after a few minutes , his cheeks
were soaking in tears . He carried no ring in his hands .
Raghu waited impatiently for the sky to break open , sprinkling the first shower of morning rays to unveil the subtle details of the earth which remained hidded beneath the dark shroud of night . He wasnt feeling good , let alone relieved that his duty for the night was over . The gay chirping of the morning birds failed to paint a pleasant shade on his dreary , dejected life . As the floating bundle of clouds changed shades from crimson to bright yellow , the first worker approached the shop . Raghu was partly relieved of the thought that he could atleast let go off the key , which was threatening to be more and more sinful by each tick of the hour . He slid onto his bicycle and started pedalling slowly towards the tattered lane which led to his house , rather a shack . Emotions and principles were at loggerheads inside his head as he harked back the distressing incident of the previous night . Stealing was never a solution for any extent of adversity . He concluded . He felt a heaviness clogging his heart chambers as the thought of his son drilled through him . He sighed deeply as if his sorrows would be expelled out of his body merely by the act .
As he walked into his house , his wife
came running to him , panting , her face flushed with joy . She handed him an envelope urging him to open
it . It contained a letter , rather a
small note with a few lines scribbled on it , which read :
‘ Raghu , I am hereby attaching a cheque for an amount which , i suppose , would be useful for your sons’s surgery . I am a businessman who intends to do charity with
part of my monetary assets . I hope your son lives a long happy life ‘ .
“ We are blessed ! Do you think it was the documentary ? But i thought , being of a local channel , nobody would even care to watch it “ . His
wife was almost shrieking out as she enquired curiously.
Raghu failed to hear her rapturous words . He saw the letters
smudging in his tears as his mind swelled up in pride . His conscience was rewarded . He knew just that .
WOW! I really don't know what to say! But the cheque is true reward for raghu's conscience... :)
ReplyDeleteGlad that you liked it akash ! always a pleasure to read your comments :)
Deletelucky Raghu normally the real Raghu's are not that lucky:)
ReplyDeletelike the way you weaved the story:)
very good effort:)
Actually there are lots of philanthropists who offer money as charity .There are Raghu's who get helped such way too . i just wrote on one such life who was lucky enough to be picked for the same :) Thankyou for the compliment kunjal and welcome to my blog :)
DeleteI loved it ... the climax was weaved wonderfully !!!
ReplyDeleteThankyou amrit ! :)
DeleteRaghu's scrupulous conscience was rewarded aptly but most of the men facing similar situation as Raghu would have succumbed to the temptation. Good one as always Maliny.
ReplyDeleteTrue Prasanna . In a world where corruption and all such vices are rampant , such Raghu's are a rarety . This is the story of one such person with an intention to highlight the worthiness of upholding such virtues in life . Thankyou for those inspiring words :)
Deletethe story just goes on and on with the flow. beautifully written. I missed this weeks WOW. But I am enjoying the posts :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Saurabh . I too read a couple of the entries . Truly wow posts all those were !
DeleteAmazingly well written. Mosquitoes biting, Raghu keep the keys safe!! Very apt narration. Need to learn a lot from you dear Maliny! :) Completely flabergasted by the story !! :)
ReplyDeleteAnd i feel completed flabbergasted by your words too tanya ;) Thankyou from the bottom of my heart for those good words :)
DeleteSmooth flow of narration ..Wonderful depiction of hope that virtues are still breathing in the society...Well written..
ReplyDeleteThank a lot For those words Odyzzey ! Hope never dies :)
DeleteThis doesnt happen all the time :( Sadly! I am glad the protagonist if your story could save his child!
ReplyDeleteTrue that you have said Rinzu . Not many are this lucky ! Welcome to my blog . Thanks for reading the story :)
DeleteNice read Maliny.
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