Wednesday, February 27

Strangers - Haiku

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Strangers , they unite 
In dim lit room - unreined 
Lovers for one night . 

Written for Carpe Diem Haiku Challenge . The prompt - Strangers .
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12 comments:

  1. ChèvrefeuilleFebruary 27, 2013 at 11:38 PM

    Wow ... what a lovestory caught in a few words and lines.

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  2. GoddessChhaviFebruary 28, 2013 at 12:48 AM

    oOOoo ;) I like that they're unreined!

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    1. MalinyFebruary 28, 2013 at 9:44 AM

      Thanks chhavi ! i used the word unreined to denote the unruly nature of the practice . .

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  3. brudbergFebruary 28, 2013 at 3:04 AM

    Oooh yes that's a story.

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2013 at 3:59 AM

    I like unreined - is that one step before, or after, unbridled :)

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  5. Suhas NaikFebruary 28, 2013 at 4:05 PM

    Good selection of words, A good Haiku.

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  6. Amrit SinhaMarch 1, 2013 at 1:20 AM

    Powerful tale of lust and (probably) love !!!

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  7. AnonymousMarch 3, 2013 at 6:20 PM

    A story in few words..This is the charm of haiku,and you kept that charm intact..

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  8. ReshmaMarch 6, 2013 at 4:17 AM

    Beautifully captured the transient nature of life...

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