Wednesday, February 27

Strangers - Haiku

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Strangers , they unite 
In dim lit room - unreined 
Lovers for one night . 

Written for Carpe Diem Haiku Challenge . The prompt - Strangers .

12 comments:

  1. Wow ... what a lovestory caught in a few words and lines.

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  2. oOOoo ;) I like that they're unreined!

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    1. Thanks chhavi ! i used the word unreined to denote the unruly nature of the practice . .

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  3. I like unreined - is that one step before, or after, unbridled :)

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  4. Good selection of words, A good Haiku.

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  5. Powerful tale of lust and (probably) love !!!

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  6. A story in few words..This is the charm of haiku,and you kept that charm intact..

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  7. Beautifully captured the transient nature of life...

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