Monday, February 18

Iceberg - Haiku

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Iceberg ! crystal beauty 
Nature's mastercraft - bright 
chiselled good . 

Crystals mould in womb
Men conquer Mother - perish 
 treacherous death trap ?

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Written for the Carpe Diem  Haiku Challenge . This week's prompt is ' Iceberg ' . To participate start following  Carpe Diem

15 comments:

  1. An awesome Haiku. The words "Nature's mastercraft- pure,chiselled good" are very apt and appealing.

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  2. Thank you for those words of appreciation ma'm . Glad to see you quoting those lines :)

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  3. "treacherous death trap"- I am sure that is what the passengers aboard the Titanic were thinking.

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    1. Indeed Charleen ! Yet i ask , with all due respect to the unfortunate incident , can man put the blame on nature ?

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    2. Thankyou for leaving behind your thoughts Charleen . Glad to have seen a new reader around :)

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  4. you have used just the right words :-)

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    1. Thankyou Amrit for the constant stream of thoughts and good words :)

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    1. Thankyou Brudberg :) welcome to my blog !

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  6. Welcome Maliny at Carpe Diem. What a wonderful haiku you have shared here with us. I especially like the first. I am your host at Carpe Diem. Hope to see you here again sharing your 'masterpieces of nature'.

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    1. Thankyou Kristjaan for those good words . Indeed a marvellous initiative Carpe Diem is ! My apologies for being late to join in . I am not sure if i will be able to participate in every challenge , but then , i look forward to it nevertheless ! :)

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  7. it is very much appealig. I liked the ending Maliny. keep up the good work :)

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    1. Thankyou Saurabh you too keep writing :)

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