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Fell shattered on the
floor a million prismatic glass pieces .
“ Aaah “ , Maya writhed in shearing pain .
The knife , dripping fresh drops of blood , lay near her .
“ Cut that ! “ . He shrieked in fervour .
Satisfied , Maya moved to review her scene on the monitor .
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And then???
ReplyDeleteHer acting was real good , maybe :)
DeleteIgnites the reader's imagination. Great.
ReplyDeleteAnd that's why I've nominated you for the Liebster Award - the details are available at the following link - I don't know anything more about the Award than what's given in the link :)
Dear friend, allow me to nominate you for this award - Liebster Award... please have a look at the following link:
http://matheikal.blogspot.in/2013/02/awards-and-their-joy.html
But I'm indeed serious when I say your writing ignites the reader's imagination.
Thats such an overwhelming gesture coming from a writer of your stature sir ! I have already commented on your blog post :) Keep coming back to this space :)
ReplyDeleteOh I loved this...
ReplyDeleteSo short yet too good with elements of suspense and surprise!!!
Glad that you liked it Satya :) keep coming back to this space !
DeleteThrilling 55er!!loved it:)
ReplyDeleteMy job was well done then :) Thank you Reshma . .
Delete"million prismatic glass pieces"--- Lovely description.
ReplyDeleteThrilling Indeed :)