Monday, February 18

The Act - 55 Fiction

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 Fell shattered on the floor a million prismatic glass pieces .

“ Aaah “ , Maya writhed in shearing pain .

The knife , dripping fresh drops of blood , lay near her .

“ Cut that ! “ . He shrieked in fervour .

Satisfied , Maya moved to review her scene on the monitor . 

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    1. Her acting was real good , maybe :)

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  2. Ignites the reader's imagination. Great.

    And that's why I've nominated you for the Liebster Award - the details are available at the following link - I don't know anything more about the Award than what's given in the link :)

    Dear friend, allow me to nominate you for this award - Liebster Award... please have a look at the following link:

    http://matheikal.blogspot.in/2013/02/awards-and-their-joy.html


    But I'm indeed serious when I say your writing ignites the reader's imagination.

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  3. Thats such an overwhelming gesture coming from a writer of your stature sir ! I have already commented on your blog post :) Keep coming back to this space :)

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  4. Oh I loved this...
    So short yet too good with elements of suspense and surprise!!!

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    1. Glad that you liked it Satya :) keep coming back to this space !

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    1. My job was well done then :) Thank you Reshma . .

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  6. "million prismatic glass pieces"--- Lovely description.
    Thrilling Indeed :)

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