Sunday, February 26

Haiku - Muse




                            The sublime you captivate me
                            In your smile blooms my loveliest verse ~ 
                            My muse forever you remain
                                                          
                                                                    ~ Maliny


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13 comments:

  1. This sounds good..but I don't think this is a haiku though..check the syllable...I'm not sure if qualifies to be a haiku though..but nvm this is well written

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  2. actually i read somewhere that the syllable isnt that strict a rule to go by wen we attempt haiku in english language. . so i let myself take advantage of that nugget . . i got your point though. . maybe next tym i can try come up with a 17 syllable one or maybe less . .thanks for stopping by to share your view and tanks a lot for the appreciation :) good day :)

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  3. wah DR.JI you are doing good work with poems and these stuffs.. beautiful stuff :D

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  4. thanks deepak :) you are on a blogging spree yourself i see ;)

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  5. Beautifully written. Captivating lines really. :)

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  6. Hi doc! ...beautifully written(technicalities overlooked for the essence of the verse)!! :):)
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  8. I loved it...Something very catchy and meaningful...

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  9. I have never understood the rules of Haiku but love the short messages they send..
    This was lovely to read..

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  10. thank you saru and farida ma'm :)

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  11. Though well composed, I really think you need to focus on construct. I fail to understand why all the people before me fail to notice it.

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