That moment when life comes crashing down
" The whole world is saying. But her heart, dissolved in trust, refused to listen.
Still why does it bother her deep ?
Tired, she dialled her husband's number,bit worried that she might disturb his sleep at 3 a.m in the morning.
An automated voice replied ;
' The number you are trying to reach is currently busy ' "
This was my very first attempt in 55 fiction. Thanks to http://www.deepakkarthikspeaks.blogspot.in/ for the inspiration :)
haha :)
ReplyDeleteit doesn't look like FIRST ATTEMPT
short yet strong..
keep posting..
Thanks for quoting me and am glad for that DOCTOR :)
It might just have been 55 words...but I could actually feel her dread.
ReplyDeleteLoved it!
A very nice first attempt indeed. 55 fiction is indeed very difficult. But you did a great job. :) It was very impactful.
ReplyDeletethanks deepak, shreya, raj :) yeah its tough to come up with a striking story in the first place . .but its fun actually . . every body can try it i suppose . . thanks for the comments :)
ReplyDeleteLOvely!!!!:-)
ReplyDeletethanks rahul !
ReplyDeleteMaybe he is working on a project with overseas team members? :P
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