Saturday, February 18

55 Fiction



   That moment when life comes crashing down




"   The whole world is saying. But her heart, dissolved in trust, refused to listen. 


Still why does it bother her deep ?


 Tired, she dialled her husband's number,bit  worried that she might disturb his sleep at 3 a.m in the morning. 


       An automated voice replied ;


' The number you are trying to reach is currently busy ' "




                 This was my very first attempt in 55 fiction. Thanks to  http://www.deepakkarthikspeaks.blogspot.in/  for the inspiration :)

7 comments:

  1. haha :)
    it doesn't look like FIRST ATTEMPT
    short yet strong..
    keep posting..
    Thanks for quoting me and am glad for that DOCTOR :)

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  2. It might just have been 55 words...but I could actually feel her dread.

    Loved it!

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  3. A very nice first attempt indeed. 55 fiction is indeed very difficult. But you did a great job. :) It was very impactful.

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  4. thanks deepak, shreya, raj :) yeah its tough to come up with a striking story in the first place . .but its fun actually . . every body can try it i suppose . . thanks for the comments :)

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  5. Maybe he is working on a project with overseas team members? :P

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