Tuesday, February 28

Fearless In The Sea


Life , like the tide of a sea
Tickle your feet ; the raptures entice you and me . . 
Before you it recedes atlast , inspite of your plea
Drenched in effervescence , for long remain thee .


Life , like the tide of a sea 
Taunt us with gory , you never expect such from thee. 
You wriggle from its clutch , you , but never ever me ;
Relieved to have survived , though its a pity you did flee .
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-soon to be part of an anthology-

22 comments:

  1. Beautifully written DR...
    Never ever give up their MESSAGE

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  2. Enjoyed your write....Thanks for sharing

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  3. lovely lines........very expressive :)
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  4. Thought provoking and deep. You have your way with words. :)

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  5. thanks a lot raj for the comment :) have a good day :)

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  6. Nice poem - Liked the metaphor of sea for life. Though not a new one, I liked the way you have brought your comparisons creatively and stuck to the theme without ranting.

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  7. appreciate you stopping by to comment . . have a good day :)

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  9. you will be :) have a great day !

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  10. Beautiful words Maliny jhi :).
    A perfect picture to go with these beautiful lines :).

    Very well expressed.
    Just loved it :).

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  11. thanks a lot for dropping by pooja :)

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  12. Powerful Words!!! loved it...Will be coming back for more..

    thanks for visiting http://nishdil.blogspot.in/ and leaving your valuable comments for me... Hope to see you often there :-)

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  13. you have a beautiful blog . . wl make it sure that i visit yours often. . thanks for dropping by :)

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  14. Beautiful poem. I always want to write something in which I can repeat the first line but I fail miserably. This work is remarkable. Sorry for a late reply, hurt my right hand badly.

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  15. Nice poem and good thoughts....

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