Tickle your feet ; the raptures entice you and me . .
Before you it recedes atlast , inspite of your plea
Drenched in effervescence , for long remain thee .
Life , like the tide of a sea
Taunt us with gory , you never expect such from thee.
You wriggle from its clutch , you , but never ever me ;
Relieved to have survived , though its a pity you did flee .
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Beautifully written DR...
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ReplyDeleteNice poem - Liked the metaphor of sea for life. Though not a new one, I liked the way you have brought your comparisons creatively and stuck to the theme without ranting.
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Very well expressed.
Just loved it :).
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem. I always want to write something in which I can repeat the first line but I fail miserably. This work is remarkable. Sorry for a late reply, hurt my right hand badly.
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