Tuesday, March 12

Origami - Haiku

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      Life afresh
     Sailing paper boats -
     Old love letters.





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    Incessant cries
    Paper furled to crane -
    Poor man's toy.



Written for Haiku Heights . Prompt - Origami

28 comments:

  1. Wow Malini great haiku !!
    Life afresh
    Sailing paper boats -
    Old love letters.
    These three lines are simply fascinating.


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  2. 1st 3 lines are simply wonderful :) beautiful haiku, Maliny :)

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  3. Wonderful! Makes you think deep and then smile.. :)

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    1. Thank you :) Had read your tangy tuesday post . good one . congratulations :)

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  4. Both are beautiful Maliny! I liked the second one more!

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    1. Like it that the second one has takers too . Thanks Valli :)

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  5. Loved the first one- childhood and adolescent tied up. :)
    Does second one mean- poor child's plight that he has to sit back with the paper toys??? (I'm too slow at this. So just asked :P).
    Cheers!
    Silly Smiles... Take you Miles :)

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    1. You have deciphered it correctly Surbhi :) Thankyou for taking time to read it . You always leave cheerful comments behind :)

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  6. Loved both of them Maliny, poignant words...

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  7. Loved it, very beautifully written!

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  8. Both of them are mind blowing Maliny dear! Lovely! Writing art at its best!

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    1. Thanks Bushra :) You are generous :)

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  9. Poor man's toy ... that's so true !!!

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    1. Isnt so ? Thank you for the constant support Amrit :)

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  10. The 3 lines Life A fresh...................... are so interesting. You have penned the intense lines in such a simple way. Great.

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    1. Thank you for dropping by kalpana and for the good words :) New to my blog right ?

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  11. Liked the boats that were once love letters
    couldn't find your link for the Carpe Diem prompt
    enjoyed the visit

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  12. aah, the paper boat is just too good, Maliny!! Lovely..

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