Thursday, March 14

End Of Snow - Haiku

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 Sun shines down
   On snow perched sprout -
 Blooming life.

 Blooming life -
 As damp tracks languish
   Beneath floral mat. 


Written for Carpe Diem.

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20 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 14, 2013 at 11:13 AM

    I hope no one treads on those snowdrops!
    Lovely haiku, thank you for sharing :)

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  2. Jennifer WagnerMarch 14, 2013 at 11:18 AM

    Love the first one especially-nicely done!

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  3. PradyumnaMarch 14, 2013 at 12:28 PM

    Life in a few words.. nice! :)

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  4. Amrit SinhaMarch 14, 2013 at 12:28 PM

    Blooming life ... this had a fresh hope in it !!!

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  5. Rick.DaddarioMarch 14, 2013 at 5:18 PM

    aloha Maliny. i like the idea of a "floral mat". that has a lot of possibilities to me. especially juxtaposed with something like a "blanket of snow". very cool moments you are going after here. aloha.

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    1. MalinyMarch 15, 2013 at 4:51 PM

      Thank you so much for the visit and for leaving behind such a good opinion Rick . Do keep visiting :)

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  6. UnknownMarch 14, 2013 at 6:15 PM

    Maliny this haiku is superb. The first three lines are fantastic. They are so optimistic !!

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  7. JazzbumpaMarch 14, 2013 at 11:28 PM

    nicely done

    these seems like classical haiku

    Cheers!
    JzB

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    1. MalinyMarch 15, 2013 at 4:52 PM

      Thank you ! Coming from you that sounds special :)

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  8. AnonymousMarch 15, 2013 at 12:08 AM

    you conveyed the sneaky arrival well :)

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  9. MalinyMarch 15, 2013 at 4:52 PM

    Thanks Krishna . . :)

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  10. UnknownMarch 15, 2013 at 11:03 PM

    great take of the prompt! and the picture of that snowdrops is perfect for your beautiful words.

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  11. ReshmaMarch 16, 2013 at 3:14 AM

    lovely image and superb lines to go with the, esp "floral mat" creates a lovely image...

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