Tuesday, March 5

Thin Ice - Haiku

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On thin ice 
Admiring sand bed 
Dreamy girl  . 

Dreamy girl
Kisses the sand bed
   Blazing fate .  


Written for Carpe Diem . Prompt - Thin ice ( Usurai )  . 
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23 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaMarch 5, 2013 at 12:24 PM

    I love the connection between sand bed and ice ... wonderfully woven !!!

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  2. UnknownMarch 5, 2013 at 12:57 PM

    Wonderful Haiku! !!

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    1. MalinyMarch 5, 2013 at 5:50 PM

      Always a pleasure to hear from you ma'm . Thank you :)

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  3. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 5, 2013 at 5:23 PM

    Pardon my confusion, but where does the blaze come from?

    Thin Ice

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    1. MalinyMarch 5, 2013 at 5:49 PM

      It was a bit complicated i suppose . Pardon me .

      When the sun blazes hot , the thin ice melts and pushes down the creature standing above it . Like wise , a dreamy girl in a dazed world meets harsh fate when she lives recklessly .

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    2. MalinyMarch 5, 2013 at 6:00 PM

      And kissing the sand bed denotes slipping down to the bottom .

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  4. Saurabh ChawlaMarch 5, 2013 at 5:33 PM

    !st time I missed the connection, second time I read and got it :) beautiful Haiku Maliny :)

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    1. MalinyMarch 5, 2013 at 5:51 PM

      I am relieved that you got it in the end :)

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  5. joanneMarch 5, 2013 at 9:10 PM

    unique and lovely...

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  6. AnonymousMarch 5, 2013 at 9:16 PM

    Deep thought ,Maliny..Amazing !!

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  7. brudbergMarch 6, 2013 at 1:09 AM

    Yes, kissing the sand bed that sounds bad.. well penned.

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    1. MalinyMarch 6, 2013 at 9:12 AM

      Thanks Brudberg ! i feel great hearing that from you .:)

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  8. UnknownMarch 6, 2013 at 1:35 AM

    loved them!

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  9. PradyumnaMarch 6, 2013 at 2:47 AM

    Well woven, deep thoughts! :)

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  10. moondustwriterMarch 6, 2013 at 4:20 AM

    beautifully sad especially for the girl

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    1. MalinyMarch 6, 2013 at 9:13 AM

      Yes it so . I feel so too . Thank you for taking time to drop by :)

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  11. ReshmaMarch 6, 2013 at 4:40 AM

    Brilliant metaphor Maliny... thin ice and life, well we can learn to admire what life blesses us with...

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    1. MalinyMarch 6, 2013 at 9:14 AM

      Thankyou Reshma . I see that you have been on a commenting spree yesterday night . My mail is flooded with your comments on various posts ! Made my day girl . Thank you :)

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  12. PanchaliMarch 6, 2013 at 1:46 PM

    Beautiful...Intense imagery!:)

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