Tuesday, March 5

Thin Ice - Haiku

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On thin ice 
Admiring sand bed 
Dreamy girl  . 

Dreamy girl
Kisses the sand bed
   Blazing fate .  


Written for Carpe Diem . Prompt - Thin ice ( Usurai )  

24 comments:

  1. I love the connection between sand bed and ice ... wonderfully woven !!!

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    1. Always a pleasure to hear from you ma'm . Thank you :)

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  3. Pardon my confusion, but where does the blaze come from?

    Thin Ice

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    1. It was a bit complicated i suppose . Pardon me .

      When the sun blazes hot , the thin ice melts and pushes down the creature standing above it . Like wise , a dreamy girl in a dazed world meets harsh fate when she lives recklessly .

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    2. And kissing the sand bed denotes slipping down to the bottom .

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  4. !st time I missed the connection, second time I read and got it :) beautiful Haiku Maliny :)

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    1. I am relieved that you got it in the end :)

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  5. Deep thought ,Maliny..Amazing !!

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  6. Yes, kissing the sand bed that sounds bad.. well penned.

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    1. Thanks Brudberg ! i feel great hearing that from you .:)

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  7. beautifully sad especially for the girl

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    1. Yes it so . I feel so too . Thank you for taking time to drop by :)

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  8. Brilliant metaphor Maliny... thin ice and life, well we can learn to admire what life blesses us with...

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    1. Thankyou Reshma . I see that you have been on a commenting spree yesterday night . My mail is flooded with your comments on various posts ! Made my day girl . Thank you :)

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  9. Beautiful...Intense imagery!:)

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