Saturday, March 2

The Solace

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I watched the sun blazing hot ,
Tangential rays unfurling pain

Stranded in the tattered street
Uncloathed ,baring my skin
Wails melting in raucous snarls .
Lost , I ran towards my shelter ,

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- Soon to be part of an anthology-

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29 comments:

  1. Perfectly scripted , good one !

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    1. Thankyou Kumar . I am happy to hear such a good opinion :)

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  2. Nicely composed. Like the word 'penumbra'

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    1. Thank you sir ! It feels great to hear that from a prolific writer as you :)

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  3. Beautiful poem! Ur a great poetess dear:)

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    1. That is so sweet of you Bushra ! i am deeply honoured :)

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  4. Very well written... Serene composition.

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    1. Hey thanks Ankita . Glad that you felt so :)

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  5. you have got talent...nice poetic composition of a situation...!!!

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    1. Thankyou Anjan . Your comment always brings smiles !

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  6. Beautiful ... well scripted ... I love the way you play with words !!!

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    1. Thankyou Amrit :) I like it that you are always there withyour opinion without fail !

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  7. Well written maliny.... the mood captures the subject matter nicely.

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    1. Thankyou :) welcome to my blog . .

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  8. Very soothing and I could connect to it.

    Beautifully penned.

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    1. Glad to know that meenakshi . your comments are always refreshing :)

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    1. hey thanks kappu! good to see you here after long :)

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  10. I got along with the stride here,,loved how you crafted..

    haaila!! i have missed so many of your posts ..shall come back soon to read them...
    I am done with my Liebster..Thanks a ton :)

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  11. Loved your choice of words...

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  12. well....your context sounds like,
    it has an ability to engulf the joy
    meaning, deepness and differentiatiality
    nice way of quilling
    this comment is not only for this post
    of yours its for all of your writes.....
    .........solace for your quill

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