Saturday, March 2

The Solace

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I watched the sun blazing hot ,
Tangential rays unfurling pain
Stranded in the tattered street
Uncloathed ,baring my skin
Wails melting in raucous snarls .
Lost , I ran towards my shelter ,

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- Soon to be part of an anthology-

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28 comments:

  1. Suhas NaikMarch 1, 2013 at 4:42 PM

    Perfectly scripted , good one !

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    1. MalinyMarch 1, 2013 at 11:22 PM

      Thankyou Kumar . I am happy to hear such a good opinion :)

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  2. Easwar ArumugamMarch 1, 2013 at 9:41 PM

    Nicely composed. Like the word 'penumbra'

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    1. MalinyMarch 1, 2013 at 11:23 PM

      Thank you sir ! It feels great to hear that from a prolific writer as you :)

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  3. BushraMarch 1, 2013 at 10:00 PM

    Beautiful poem! Ur a great poetess dear:)

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    1. MalinyMarch 1, 2013 at 11:24 PM

      That is so sweet of you Bushra ! i am deeply honoured :)

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  4. Ankita SinghalMarch 1, 2013 at 10:02 PM

    Very well written... Serene composition.

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    1. MalinyMarch 1, 2013 at 11:25 PM

      Hey thanks Ankita . Glad that you felt so :)

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  5. UnknownMarch 1, 2013 at 11:42 PM

    you have got talent...nice poetic composition of a situation...!!!

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    1. MalinyMarch 2, 2013 at 10:50 AM

      Thankyou Anjan . Your comment always brings smiles !

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  6. Amrit SinhaMarch 2, 2013 at 12:01 AM

    Beautiful ... well scripted ... I love the way you play with words !!!

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    1. MalinyMarch 2, 2013 at 10:51 AM

      Thankyou Amrit :) I like it that you are always there withyour opinion without fail !

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  7. Dark KnightMarch 2, 2013 at 1:34 AM

    Well written maliny.... the mood captures the subject matter nicely.

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  8. Woman'n'BeyondMarch 2, 2013 at 4:55 PM

    Very soothing and I could connect to it.

    Beautifully penned.

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    1. MalinyMarch 2, 2013 at 9:11 PM

      Glad to know that meenakshi . your comments are always refreshing :)

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  9. PradyumnaMarch 2, 2013 at 5:20 PM

    Wonderful! Well written!

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  10. RajeshMarch 2, 2013 at 6:13 PM

    Very perfect.

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  11. KappuMarch 2, 2013 at 6:48 PM

    Love the mood! ;)

    Kappu

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    1. MalinyMarch 2, 2013 at 9:12 PM

      hey thanks kappu! good to see you here after long :)

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  12. AdityaMarch 2, 2013 at 8:19 PM

    Good one ... free flowing.

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  13. MalinyMarch 2, 2013 at 9:10 PM

    Thankyou :)

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  14. AnonymousMarch 2, 2013 at 10:51 PM

    I got along with the stride here,,loved how you crafted..

    haaila!! i have missed so many of your posts ..shall come back soon to read them...
    I am done with my Liebster..Thanks a ton :)

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  15. ReshmaMarch 6, 2013 at 4:55 AM

    Loved your choice of words...

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  16. Roshan YadavMarch 26, 2013 at 6:58 PM

    well....your context sounds like,
    it has an ability to engulf the joy
    meaning, deepness and differentiatiality
    nice way of quilling
    this comment is not only for this post
    of yours its for all of your writes.....
    .........solace for your quill

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