Thursday, March 7

Spring Haze - Haiku

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Chime of the temple gong 
Travels through hazy spring maze -
Safety siren . 

Safety siren
Drifts through eerie forest - 
   Parched loner smiles . 


Written for Carpe Diem . Prompt - Onitsura's Spring Haze 

17 comments:

  1. Aha, I could almost hear the mesmerizing sound of the gong ---Dunnnnn..
    Fantastic!

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    1. Thats is indeed heartening to hear Satya :)

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  3. I have been in that parched loner's shoes more than once...

    Holybell

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  4. beautiful reading! loved the interpretation.

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  5. Very meaningful haiku. The temple bell is reassuring the lonely traveller. An optimistic poem.

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  6. Yes the calling bell is calling to safety.

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  7. love the last line... it resonates with my soul:-)

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    1. Thankyou so much Laura for the comment and for following ! :)

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  8. I can hear the temple gong now...It has a calming effect. Will try to be regular at your blog so that I dont flood your mailbox with my comments :)

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  9. Parched loner smiles ... loved it!

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  10. Wow! Beautiful picture and haiku Maliny :)

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